Okay done! There were no chunks missing at all! Everything was clear and voices were easy to distinguish.
At 12:30 when Wilson says "You're unbelievable!" you totally nailed RSL's delivery. Also, House telling Cameron she was a people person at 20:30 sounded like House through and through. Also, good job on Chase's accent! :D I would fail miserably at that.
There were only a few places where some word orders were mixed slightly or a word was left out. There are 6 that I noticed and wrote down. None of them are noticeable in my opinion, as they do not break the flow of the story, nor do they change the meaning of any dialog or sentences. Had I not had the story in front of me, following along, I most assuredly would not have noticed them at all.
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At 12:30 when Wilson says "You're unbelievable!" you totally nailed RSL's delivery. Also, House telling Cameron she was a people person at 20:30 sounded like House through and through. Also, good job on Chase's accent! :D I would fail miserably at that.
There were only a few places where some word orders were mixed slightly or a word was left out. There are 6 that I noticed and wrote down. None of them are noticeable in my opinion, as they do not break the flow of the story, nor do they change the meaning of any dialog or sentences. Had I not had the story in front of me, following along, I most assuredly would not have noticed them at all.
Do you want the times for those?